Friday, 9 June 2017

100 Word Challenge - soldiers perspective

My Reflection

I have been learning to add detail to my writing.  We had to imagine we are a solider or a family member and write about this pitcher.  I used sum of my 5 senses.  My next step is to add more interesting.  My next step is to add more adjectives to make my writing more interesting.  


1 comment:

Pip Lodge said...

Great work Dylan